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Newbie to the community writing poetry hoping someone will notice me.

Hey hey hey.

tazzzyy 4 Mar 4
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Welcome!

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Welcome, dear friend, to Agnostic.com
Where you're free from the gun, the knife, and the bomb
Of those who kill in the name of their god
And whose logic is, at the best, slipshod

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Hello 🙂 and welcome!!!!!

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Who could have dreamed a flower
The sea, a star, the sky
If given all eternity
I guarantee, not I

        Happi
happi Level 1 Mar 4, 2018
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Useta watch fat albert back in the day. Cosby got a bit preachy though so we'd often turn it off after Rudy got in whatever trouble he was going to cause for that episode.

"fat albert ... FAT ALBERT ... they should call you lunchtime. No class."

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Welcome and may everybody notice you in this little place of ours. Just be yourself and keep your agenda alive. Your future is still to be prosed and versed. Live long.

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Twist the time to realize, all innocent questions are really true lies.

Half of it will never get, the complexity of life we'll never regret.

How could anyone else see, there really is no distance between you and me.

Simple sounds become profound, little words become solid and sound.

How could you ever seek to create, an invisible line that can't make or break?

I know everyday who I am inside, I let my words reach far and wide.

Beautiful!

@tazzzyy Flattery will get you everywhere missy xD

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Welcome to the group, feel free to post some of your poetry if you want to.I am sure people here would love to read it

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Hey, hey, hey
Say it in prose or mix it in rhyme.
It doesn't matter, I'm just saying
any old time.

Hey, hey, hey
Spend some time with Agnostic.com
Reading, writing, exploring, dreaming
every old time.

cava Level 7 Mar 4, 2018
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I've noticed you ... so SUCCESS!

On a serious note, welcome to the merry gang.

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Consider yourself officially noticed.

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I would like to read your poetry. Welcome🙂

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Hi, welcome to the group. Post one of your poems sometime. I'm a former poet myself...Lol.

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Welcome and I hope you find some interesting people and interesting topics, that will fire up your imagination.

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Was that a Fat Albert impersonation?

godef Level 7 Mar 4, 2018

Not even but now it is

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You have been noticed

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Consider yourself noticed! Welcome aboard 🙂

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Welcome!

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You are noticed & feel free to post your poetry! Welcome!

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Hey. You’ve been noticed.

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sempai notices

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(pulls out some writing from a decade ago)

Ahem....

"am lost. I am broken. Where do l go from here?

l got crazy. It was a girl. The most perfect beautiful angel in the world. am not built for this
I'm built for hate. but I tried to have it

anyways

chipped teeth and broken nails tried to kiss and stroke this lovely creature.

In the end... she only ended up poisoned and cut. can't say anything without the venom. My contagion is constant and unrelenting.

I don't see a light. don't see an end

I'm too tough for suicide. It burns... the inability to just stop.

So this angel left me wounded... and only knew to further get injured.

tried to help. But I am hate. l only know the crude way of doing things. Maliciously l clawed my way in and out-over and under. It is the way I am.

now this broken angel is somewhere in the world - trying to pull herself back together... and l sit in my selfish world trying to make sense of it... and know that I can only know pain and misery... but can't die Until am due

Maybe one day I will find a cruel beast to crush the weak with. Until then will cry phantom tears for feelings I have no right to"

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I welcome you to seek and find
That all of us here, will speak our mind
We'll talk and chat we all are strong
I hope you find that you belong...

Welcome! I myself am new as well and if you ever need to talk don't hesitate to ask, I'll be glad to help out in any way I can. Good luck!

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