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Do You? Or don't you? Like poetry?

Please share any reasons, for, against or neutral.

Maya405 7 Nov 10
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I like to read it
I like to write it
If I had some chocolate
I surely would bite it ...
<grin>

Or sprite it

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I absolutely love poetry. Poems help me to transcend and find glimpses of meaning in this absurd little world. I've written poems since I was 12, published some along the way, but written many, many more. Some roll off the pen with gentle ease, others struggle through draft after draft only to come out a bit flat, and everything in between. I've also taught poetry and fiction in high school Creative Writing courses for over 18 years. Reading and writing poems is how I stay in touch with my passionate creative self. I have to do it. I really enjoy talking about it as well. I'm great at analyzing, finding poetic elements to praise, and offering constructive criticism, plus I've no trouble accepting that type of feedback from others. It is often my goal to find the most phenomenal location, even in a place of relative beauty. A group of poets and poetry enthusiast on an atheist/agnostic website that is almost entirely free of trolls...Let's be poets and get silly.

This is an inspiring 'monologue' on poetry, @hotmess69.

Yes, let's be poets, and silliness, of course, is one of the many enticing options we'll have.

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I like it.
I'd like to write it if I could.
I don't know if it reads like it should.
Often times it's reflective.
Other times it's perspective.
Many times it's depressing.
Though there are times with your mind it's messing.
Yes, oft' times I like it.
Other times I lack wit.

SamL Level 7 Nov 10, 2017

WOW @Saml!
Another hidden poet surfaces.
('I don't know if it reads like it should': there's no 'should' in poetry.)

Well, see there you go.
I did say I don't know 😀

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I do enjoy poetry. I'm an artist and I also write on occasion. Not as much as I used to. It's a way to express the repressed part of you. Things you may hide or not. You can put it down on paper to get it out or off your shoulders. Write it down just for your eyes or you can share it with the world.

So many poetry-lovers!
Thanks for your thoughts, @LonghairedJake

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I do also, but I'm unfortunately not a poetic writer, just have a deep appreciation for a well turned phrase, and rhyming metre.

May be share a 'well-turned phrase' with us @Squirrellglider

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As a Multi-Genre Lyricist who spent 8 years in Nashville and had many co-writes made into demos'-I love poetry.....Here is an opening verse from one of my songs that people often say reminds them of Keats..

The Bells of Diane
Copyright 2017

Bells of a steady loud cadence
Play yonder and surely her name
Floats out as their echoes within you
Always keeps you under her reign

Hoped you liked that.....

If you would like to hear the song-just message me with your email address and I will send you the MP3

Thank you, @VirginiaMan65.
Can you not post your songs so we can all hear them?

Sure Maya-be glad to but am new to this site-didnt even know we were able to post songs to it........How do we do that?

I don't see the way to post songs here-if you do-let me know...

If you post a link to your song that works.

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This is a recent poem of mine:

Ignorant Parade

It’s evident the time we’ve spent
adrift from thought and common sense
have lulled the dawn with dull intent
and left the shining morn

Her eyes alight with the turquoise sky
scalds like a finger over velvet lies
her pearly disposition waits for my reply
some words are better left unspoken

Through waves of gloom in a gathering haze
we primp and groom for an ignorant parade
what awaits hereafter should not make us feel afraid
it’s just another ray of rising sun

From time to time our fingers intertwine
grasping for purpose like an abstract mind
this ragged bridge keeps us in a narrow line
and passing only costs a silver token

~Jud

'From time to time our fingers intertwine
grasping for purpose like an abstract mind'
Beautiful.
Thanks, @hotmess69

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I like poetry that preserves the original paradigm of poetry -- using rhyme, meter, and other techniques to help the oral transmission of long stories. Horatius at the Bridge (Thomas Babbington), written hundreds of years after movable type and publishing, is a perfect example and one of my favorites. Here is a snippet:

Then out spake brave Horatius,
The Captain of the gate:
“To every man upon this earth
Death cometh soon or late. 220
And how can man die better
Than facing fearful odds
For the ashes of his fathers
And the temples of his gods,

“And for the tender mother 225
Who dandled him to rest,
And for the wife who nurses
His baby at her breast,
And for the holy maidens
Who feed the eternal flame,— 230
To save them from false Sextus
That wrought the deed of shame?

“Hew down the bridge, Sir Consul,
With all the speed ye may;
I, with two more to help me, 235
Will hold the foe in play.
In yon strait path a thousand
May well be stopped by three:
Now who will stand on either hand,
And keep the bridge with me?”

This is a great example, @andygee, i like the story-telling aspect of rhymed/metered poems though i most enjoy free verse.

Hi @Maya405

I'm an alumnus of Barrow Street Poets - Emily Glenn. I tried my hand at free verse, had a couple of decent poems, realized I wasn't a poet, but di learn to enjoy the classics a la Rumpole of the Baily.

Hi Again @Maya405 -- I should also mention that I liked this poem so much that I put the story (played out by the goats) in my novel SCAPEGOATS (Golden Fleece Press March 2018).

Good luck with your novel next year, @andygee.
I write novels too, check it out here:
[gandholi.wordpress.com]

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This one time
I wrote a poem about poetry
And then I wrote a poem about that one
And the fact that I wrote it
Then I wrote one about that
...Am I canon, yet?
It eventually got so meta
That I took that poem and put it up to a mirror in front of a mirror and pondered if, at any given moment, there is actually an equal amount of donut holes and donuts in the world
I almost broke the universe
So, then I just decided to write about, like, romance and shit

[I got that fire, though:]
Shall I shake space
And roar time to a rumble
Shall I disturb the foundations
And make the fabrics crumble

Shall I stand and rise and fall
Or do nothing, nothing at all
Shall I get out of this chair
This roof, these walls... this air

Shall I huff and puff
Bigger than myself
Shall I strive for enough
And nothing else

Shall I become immobile
Dare I learn to endure
Shall I not be stopped or noble
And shed this filthy pure

Shall I choose the wrongful path
And make it no less my own
Shall I groom my pride, my wrath
And sit complacently at home

Shall I be what I set out to be
And that will be the quest
Should only I suffer my own mind
And say it was for the best

Shall I wrack my brain
And be a stain upon the sky
Shall I go insane
But be genius on the sly

Shall I wish to begin again
Shall I bring about the end
For if I must do the work of gods
I should practice their pride
And if I to do the Devil’s deeds
Then may adopt his stride

#oneofthegreatsordietryinggofekye'self

Delighted to read your poem/s, @FuckReligion.
Thank you.

Does the poem end with the word universe?

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Yes..I am a poet and writer.

Please share!

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I'm a musician. I write songs that sometimes rhyme, lol.

Here's my latest work in progress.

I don't forgive, I don't forget.
(blues background music ...)

My blade's the only truth I've met.
My heart the only lie and yet.
Ice is cold and water's wet.
No, you aint seen nuttin' yet.
I don't forgive; I don't forget.
.
My nightmares worse, my daydreams best.
My laughters cursed, my tears are blessed.
Ice is cold and water's wet.
No, you aint seen nuttin' yet.
I don't forgive; I don't forget.
.
His whore you were, enraptured more.
You hid behind that name I wore.
Ice is cold and water's wet.
No, you aint seen nuttin' yet.
I don't forgive; I don't forget.

Orphanage! you sweated sweat.
Never, you swore - and called his bet.
Ice is cold and water's wet.
No, you aint seen nuttin' yet.
I don't forgive; I don't forget.
.
You're dead and gone. I'm still here.
My blade is true its edge still dear.
Ice is cold and water's wet.
No, you aint seen nuttin' yet.
I don't forgive; I don't forget.

Thank you, @CowboySteel, for posting your poem.

I get whiffs of violence and misogyny, two things i'm not really keen on. Let me know, if i'm mistaken.

Hi, Maya405. Yes, your nose is well tuned.

The woman was my mother who had a bastard (me) with a man I never knew. I wore her married name, the name of someone I wasn't related to.

The violence was towards the child who grew up in a Foster home without a father or a name.

The song is the howl of that child.

Thanks for sharing your lyrics, particularly for such a personal subject matter. I really like the symbolic value of the blade, but feel like "ice is cold and water's wet" is a bit too obvious to be repeated in each stanza. I'd like to see the phase morph as the poem develops.

Yeah, I hear ya. Sounds better with the music. Repetition can be annoying as hell. Lol.

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My favourite poem is the one that starts 'Thirty days hath September' because it actually tells you something.

It does indeed, @Heretic1965.
Other than being 'educational', nursery rhymes are comforting to me.

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some poets Clenched Soul by Pablo Neruda
We have lost even this twilight.
No one saw us this evening hand in hand
while the blue night dropped on the world.

I have seen from my window
the fiesta of sunset in the distant mountain tops.

Sometimes a piece of sun
burned like a coin in my hand.

I remembered you with my soul clenched
in that sadness of mine that you know.

Where were you then?
Who else was there?
Saying what?
Why will the whole of love come on me suddenly
when I am sad and feel you are far away?

The book fell that always closed at twilight
and my blue sweater rolled like a hurt dog at my feet.

Always, always you recede through the evenings
toward the twilight erasing statues

'Sometimes a piece of sun
burned like a coin in my hand.'

Beautiful! Thanks, @zerofrankp

Do not go gentle into that good night
Dylan Thomas
.
Do not go gentle into that good night,
Old age should burn and rave at close of day;
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

Though wise men at their end know dark is right,
Because their words had forked no lightning they
Do not go gentle into that good night.

Good men, the last wave by, crying how bright
Their frail deeds might have danced in a green bay,
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

Wild men who caught and sang the sun in flight,
And learn, too late, they grieved it on its way,
Do not go gentle into that good night.

Grave men, near death, who see with blinding sight
Blind eyes could blaze like meteors and be gay,
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

And you, my father, there on the sad height,
Curse, bless, me now with your fierce tears, I pray.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

Pablo. Neruda is my absolute favorite poet. I too have seen that fiesta!

My favorite Neruda Poem...Most days:

Too Many Names

Mondays are meshed with Tuesdays
and the week with the whole year.
Time cannot be cut
with your weary scissors,
and all the names of the day
are washed out by the waters of night.

No one can claim the name of Pedro,
nobody is Rosa or Maria,
all of us are dust or sand,
all of us are rain under rain.
They have spoken to me of Venezuelas,
of Chiles and of Paraguays;
I have no idea what they are saying.
I know only the skin of the earth
and I know it is without a name.

When I lived amongst the roots
they pleased me more than flowers did,
and when I spoke to a stone
it rang like a bell.

It is so long, the spring
which goes on all winter.
Time lost its shoes.
A year is four centuries.

When I sleep every night,
what am I called or not called?
And when I wake, who am I
if I was not I while I slept?

This means to say that scarcely
have we landed into life
than we come as if new-born;
let us not fill our mouths
with so many faltering names,
with so many sad formalities,
with so many pompous letters,
with so much of yours and mine,
with so much of signing of papers.

I have a mind to confuse things,
unite them, bring them to birth,
mix them up, undress them,
until the light of the world
has the oneness of the ocean,
a generous, vast wholeness,
a crepitant fragrance.

~Pablo Neruda

always liked that line

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I enjoy peory which finds or creates beauty and/or which creates substantive patterns of meaning -- deep, poignant, intimate.

3

Well-written prose is, to my mind, as beautiful as music and can bring to life deep feelings. As another form of expression, I think we should "bring it on".

I agree @zanyfish, well written prose can be so poetic.
Bring it on, yes.

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I used to read and write more poetry and still think it's one of the best forms for us to express ourselves. Yet the poetry section is so dusty 😟

Yes, it is for me too @Mantra.
How about 'airing' the poetry section a bit?

Good idea 🙂

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Sometimes

Sometime soon, i guess, @ElMehdiMido...

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I like several poems. I don't like some poems--the ones that wannabe poets write when they have no clue as to how to go about it.

@ScottRenz, looking forward to read some of the ones you like.

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I don,t know if I could be a poet, I could be but not even know it.
Thinking of words might take some time, it's even harder to make them rhyme.
Poetry to music can soothe the soul, if relaxation is your goal.
The world is full of trouble and strife, so try and relax and enjoy your life.
Just look out of your window and enjoy the view, peace on earth is my wish for you.
Happiness and health i hope you will find, the world should come together for the sake of all mankind.

You are rhyming for sure, @AndyMax!
Thank you.

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@Admin, lots of poetry-lovers.
Can we have a category for Poems or Poetry, please?

We are working on a tag system that will handle this... let me add "poetry" to the default tags now. If I get it working, you'll see "poetry" tag at the top of the page. 🙂

The BEST ADMIN EVER!
Thank you @Admin

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I don't appreciate poetry to its fullest is the best way to describe it. Jazz is similar.

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I do like Poetry - There is a huge power in the written/spoken word. Charles Bukowski is one of my favourites -

0

I love poetry. I used to write a lot of poems. Got wrapped up in music so much kinda lost track of it tho.

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