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I haven't written a poem in a very long time. However, I received a phone call the other day -- a sad phone call -- that inspired me to write. The call came only an hour or so before an open mike night at the high school where I teach, so I read it. I just moved to Florida this past July. I had been teaching at an alternative school in Louisiana -- mostly expelled students living in rural/suburban poverty. Here is my poem:

"Someone's Babies"

A childhood erased
by drugs and dollar bills
by guns
by stupid smack-talk about respect

But real respect
for each other's lives
eludes them
like answers will elude their mothers
like peace will elude their friends
like children chasing each other through a maze of mirrors
except
it's no game

Tomorrow, when their mothers awaken
Lentrell won't be there to do his happy dance
Brandon won't be there to get to be a man
Alex won't be there to compliment me on what I wear
Thailan won't be there to smile
no

Desperation took them
gang violence took them
took their potential
and wiped it away
like crumbs and slop left on the cafeteria table

Tonight
someone desperately wants to hug
those young men
those someone's friends
those someone's babies

#children #violence #friends #florida #poetry #drugs #teach #guns

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Welcome back to writing

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I thoroughly enjoyed the imagery and commentary on your society and hope that your efforts change many from destruction to worthwhile constructive existance. ?

Answer 3

And how was it received at the open mike session and by whom?


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