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The child's the father of the man, the proper study of mankind is man

But the grapes of wrath are ruptured, death and poison in my hand

Your stiff head's in the leaves, your bloodied forehead in the sand

And my brain is full of razors so I do not understand

There's a canopy of starlight, sky graying in the east

A thing of great undoing by whatever drowsy beast

Just as the sun is rising, making all this fresh

Flowers bloom like orchids that are feeding on your flesh

RaaChenn 7 June 15
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Nice. Dark and beautiful at the same time.

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Dark. My favourite line is "And my brain is full of razors so I do not understand" although the last line runs a close second.

pixiedust Level 8 June 15, 2018
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Profound..,

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Angry, very passionate about disdain. In life, all emotions seem to drive our actions some thought out some in haste. Great flow and rhyming

azzow2 Level 9 June 15, 2018
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