Just made this today it may need polishing.
River zombie:
Don your rafter of never look back.
Capsized in your canoe, lost your paddle it is stuck up in some goo.
Draped up on a riverbank some crock ate your kazoo.
Cracked your raft on a spacecraft of never look back.
Burnt to a crisp lost your quip in need of some glue.
Esses and bends this river has no end.
Wash and waves many crashes and booms.
Soaked and wet water up to my hips in need of a harpoon.
Eddy grabs you fast and quick, better pull the lanyard on that may west vest.
Current sways you right toward that cascade.
Reach for a branch who knew that was a bare staring at you.
Bam land on the beach your mind has reached its fullest breach.
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Freedompath
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July 8, 2018
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When I do not sit and construct a poem i play complex rhyming with my kids some times I do silly and sometimes very complex. There is some research that says this teaches complex logic skills.
@azzow2 it is all in the brain!
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