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Wing Of Desire

From your woman body
Like a wing was born my desire
It grew from your body entire
From your feet to your hips
From your light waist
To your shoulders spring
Like a wing was born my desire
It grew from your body entire.

Eldovis 7 Aug 2
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You might consider adding a couple of lines to cover the beauty of her face. Desire finds its true force in the eyes.

Lovely write. Thank you.

rcandlish Level 7 Aug 13, 2018

You will notice there is no face. In most of my sculpture there is no head, or is represented in a very abstracted form.

@Eldovis I did notice the sculpture and assumed that it was the source of inspiration for the poem. Both are superb as they stand. I raised the comment merely as a suggestion that the poem might reach beyond and touch the real mystery of desire unto worship, that is our appreciation of the women we love.

@rcandlish I agree that desire, might find true force looking in the eyes, but that would required a different poem. Thanks for the comment.

@Eldovis You're welcome! Look forward to seeing/reading your future work.

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What awesome inspiration!

Justjoni Level 8 Aug 2, 2018
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Lust what a youthful persuasion.

azzow2 Level 9 Aug 2, 2018