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I don't usually share a lot of my poetry because it can be a bit dark and personal, but I really enjoy writing poetry to channel my thoughts and feelings. Here is one of my poems:

My mind is a beast that can't be tamed,
with thoughts that try to eat me alive.
It twists and turns, like would a maze,
and yet it's crucial to survive.

My greatest weakness, and an asset;
curious and questioning,
losing focus on the present;
searching, seeking, and doubting.

A hassle when I am alone,
unless I am preoccupied.
With others, they don't understand
the thoughts I've tried so hard to hide.

For seeking minds are often shamed
and told their ideas are wrong.
Yet still, this mind will not be tamed;
I'll seek more answers until I'm gone.

pan_heathen97 7 May 3
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Fantastic. I'm right there with you as well!

ZJayPo Level 5 May 4, 2018
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I head my voice in YOUR poem!! Lol

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The personal touch? Yes!

tioteo Level 8 May 3, 2018
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Share more please.

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I have dark ones also. I do not mind sharing and the critics because it helps me improve.

azzow2 Level 9 May 3, 2018
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