My first published work. Short and a bit racy (18 rated)
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Feel free to reply to any comment by clicking the "Reply" button.Good piece. Nice word imaging. Interesting premise coupled to a "different" ending. Critical comment: You need to edit your work more carefully before release, my friend.
evidentialist
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Mar 15, 2018
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Your not the 1st to say that and if I could have re-edited it I would but thank you.
This story was inspired by Maria, a lady I met online. She had a fantasy of being auctioned to a bunch of guys sitting in leather armchairs. This was a fantasy only but it made me think about something I had heard somewhere that men want to be loved and women want to be wanted. Then I thought well what if being wanted is not enough anymore. I could have gone down the romantic road but it had been done so many times. I also wanted to explore the differences between voyeur and poseur. It necessitated creating a ruse whereby Maria`s beauty was negated, hence the plot.
273kelvin
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Mar 15, 2018
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Thank you! I've bookmarked it for this evening!
Lysistrata
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