Came up with this a couple days ago. If my math skills are correct, each line's syllables correlate to a prime number, first ascending then descending. If you include the title and the silly bit at the end, it goes: 1, 2, 3, 5, 7, 11, 13, 17, 13, 11, 7...etc.
Enjoy!
"god"
A poem:
He just "was"...
He "was" and "wanted"...
He "wanted" and made it so...
He made it so and judged it as he saw fit...
Judging as he saw fit, he found it to be lacking...
Finding it thus to be lacking, he raised a smiting hand against it...
He raised a smiting hand, and punished repeatedly...
Punished repeatedly, yet still rebelling
"Always rebelling!" he cried...
"Here" (toss) "kill my son."
"We're good now"
The end
ugh.
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Feel free to reply to any comment by clicking the "Reply" button.I re-read the instructions and get it. I have a thing about prime numbers too. One note... I used to be American and I remember back to when I was five years old and we say "poem" as "pome" which implied it has one syllable. Actually it has two: "po-em".
Garbonza
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Sep 21, 2019
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Awww, dammit! Maybe I can replace "a poem" with something like "begin:"
i got lost somewhere along the way
TheDoubter
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Sep 20, 2019
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That's ok. It was a flight of whimsy. In my head it was what I used to believe as a christian; from the beginning of creation to the "final sacrifice". I guess I didnt include the heaven part, though. Shoot
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