Okay folks can you help? I am in the midst of writing a song.It was inspired by hearing one on the radio. A stadium rock ballad that was so bland it could not identify itself in a police line up. So I combined this with my detestation regarding the over use of the word " awesome. "
It is an ironic pastiche. The music is quite simple and has been sorted but I am looking for comic rhymes with awesome. here is what I have so far....
Just another American song
you know you hear them all day long
And though you can`t recall its name
because they all sound just the same
(can I get a shout of)
Awesome, Awesome
Awesome, Awesome
Awesome, Awesome
Awesome, Awesome
Its` all about how I met this girl
And how she lived inside of me
and how she really rocked my world
Just like a recipe, made by, made by Nigella Lawson*
Awesome, Lawson
Awesome. Lawson
Awesome, Lawson
Awesome, Awesome
You know we texted every day
Even when she went away
In my car or in my home
I was always on my phone
Till I had. till I had..a sore thumb
Awesome, Sore thumb
Awesome, Sore thumb
Awesome, Sore thumb
Awesome, Awesome
(there now will be a middle 8. with lots of details about my car which would bore most non petrol heads but will end in the word chrome and sound " awesome " )
Repeat 1st verse
Any ideas people?
*google it
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That song is going platinum!
Palindromeman
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Apr 12, 2018
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Lighters at the ready
Ransom is a favorite for me.
FrayedBear
Level 9
Apr 12, 2018
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I like ransom but not sure it rhymes as well as foursome, Les Dawson or your mum.
@273kelvin mum's worse than bum - and we all know what that is!
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