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Is a shame she don't read half of anything I write. So I'm just writing to you. I have finally figured out the whole gods concept. My mom and dad are the gods of my life. Not living, life. Amanda is the god of love, at least my god of love. The man formally known as my stepdad is the god of hate, at least my god of hate because there is no doubt in my mind I hate his fucking soul. Everyone reading these messages in one way or another are gods, yes each and every one of you are gods of my insanely. Don't feel to special, that is alot of that god including but not limited to myself. Alot of that god also goes with the despite god. The god of love also entertwines to a different level with you all too. Again, don't feel special, you all are just part of my life. I guess that a level of my understanding is aquired through much thought and alot of past decisions to do stuff not to be spoken of in open group. Everyone is someone's god, in one level of understanding, but don't mistake this for religion. Religion is a fucking fake cult of people all looking for answers to the questions that only exist because life doesn't make sense without reason. I must stop for now. Feel free to comment.

toeachisown 3 Nov 14
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If I am a god of sorts then may I offer some words, if not of wisdom then at least direction. Write better! "Is a shame she don't read half of anything I write." !! Why does that not surprise me? Read it back to yourself. Does it sound correct? Scan? Can I improve on that sentence?
I had a songwriting partner who bemoaned that his gf was reluctant to sing his songs. It was not out of malice that I said "Then write better songs then" His songs were too introspective to the point of narcissism. The over use of "I" that started nearly every line or appeared in that line must have put her off, I know it did me. Not that Im saying you have the same fault but sorry your post was not an easy read.
Basic rule of relationships 101 = Do not expect them to fancy you if no one else does. Similarly don`t expect her to read your stuff if no one else wants to.
I hope that I have not been too harsh. My intention was not to hurt but to improve. Everything that you put on the page must be read over at least once. Then again till it is right.

PS. I read and edited this comment 3 times.

@273kelvin That is easier said than done for people without a good education.

@Stephanie99 I failed sandpit

@273kelvin What is sandpit?

@Stephanie99 Pre-school or nursery. It is comic shorthand for the fact that my education was limited and a resounding failure.
Being slightly dyslexic and unable to spell. Each sentence I now write is perpetrated with red underlines. This a vast improvement to the crossings out and scribble that was my academic work, such as it was. I could however read and read well. I knew what I wanted to say, how to say it and if sounded correct. Now with the advent of digital technology I can edit as well. A skill I recommend to toeachhisown

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