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Newbie to the community writing poetry hoping someone will notice me.

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tazzzyy 4 Mar 4
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Hey. You’ve been noticed.

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sempai notices

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(pulls out some writing from a decade ago)

Ahem....

"am lost. I am broken. Where do l go from here?

l got crazy. It was a girl. The most perfect beautiful angel in the world. am not built for this
I'm built for hate. but I tried to have it

anyways

chipped teeth and broken nails tried to kiss and stroke this lovely creature.

In the end... she only ended up poisoned and cut. can't say anything without the venom. My contagion is constant and unrelenting.

I don't see a light. don't see an end

I'm too tough for suicide. It burns... the inability to just stop.

So this angel left me wounded... and only knew to further get injured.

tried to help. But I am hate. l only know the crude way of doing things. Maliciously l clawed my way in and out-over and under. It is the way I am.

now this broken angel is somewhere in the world - trying to pull herself back together... and l sit in my selfish world trying to make sense of it... and know that I can only know pain and misery... but can't die Until am due

Maybe one day I will find a cruel beast to crush the weak with. Until then will cry phantom tears for feelings I have no right to"

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I notice you and i want to see from you more poetry, please!!

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notices you

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Tonight.
I must think to anew another day.

Tonight.
I must not askew my thought to prevent the dawn of the next day.

Tonight.
I stare at the blanketed wall.
Wondering what history it has saw.

Tonight… Must reach beyond my thoughts for just Today.

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Good luck! I love to write myself!

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We are a varied species
As were our connections to the divine
I'll not deny you yours
If you won't deny me mine.
As for me you'll see my eyes go up
To our cousins in the sky
Light our nights from outragous heights
Enough to see our walk home by
I need no myths no gods no magic
To save my mind or soul
My sore old body does just fine
Let love and truth be the goal.
We're all in this together
And we've already had a lot of luck
Let us fix the world and make things better
Then let's get high and fuck.

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I welcome you to seek and find
That all of us here, will speak our mind
We'll talk and chat we all are strong
I hope you find that you belong...

Welcome! I myself am new as well and if you ever need to talk don't hesitate to ask, I'll be glad to help out in any way I can. Good luck!

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I welcome you to seek and find
That all of us here, will speak our mind
We'll talk and chat we all are strong
I hope you find that you belong...

Welcome! I myself am new as well and if you ever need to talk don't hesitate to ask, I'll be glad to help out in any way I can. Good luck!

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Welcome.

Gohan Level 7 Mar 4, 2018
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She says she will love him forever.
He says Show me
He says he will never drink again.
She says show me.
He's going forward will be a better employee.
Do the things needed to be done.
Show me.
A surgeon says he can remove a tumor.
Show me.
Engineers say they can fly 100 people in the air.
Show me.
Now when you are sick or need a flight do you get down on both knees.
When someone breaks in to your house do you pray or call the police.
That's not how it works it's mysterious, oh please.
Let me guess he is alive and all he wants to do is hold me
But all I see and feel are people trying to control me
Tell me how live, about the evil inside but don't even know me.
If you knew what was learned from those who came before me.
And how and why a life with a god felt so lonely.
How love with a threat just sounds so phony.
How torture of animals and the innocent is ment to atone me.
I won't , I can't that evil is too far below me.
I'm free from your oppressor I owe no fee
Keep the threats to your self,stay low key
Bring your problems to light about your friend that we don't see
How you know what you know, but I can tell that you don't read.
You heard what you heard you have not woke. your still asleep.
Look.
You want me to learn, to see , to hear, to know what you know
Because I'm not granted the keys that you hold......
then show me.

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You've been noticed! Welcome to our august community. Hope you have an enjoyable time.

Hope we get to see some of your poetry.

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Welcome Poet! I hope you dind a comfortable place here. If you ever feel like sharing, please let me know I have a few I might show as well. ???? lol

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Welcome!

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Welcome, dear friend, to Agnostic.com
Where you're free from the gun, the knife, and the bomb
Of those who kill in the name of their god
And whose logic is, at the best, slipshod

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Hello 🙂 and welcome!!!!!

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Who could have dreamed a flower
The sea, a star, the sky
If given all eternity
I guarantee, not I

        Happi
happi Level 1 Mar 4, 2018
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Useta watch fat albert back in the day. Cosby got a bit preachy though so we'd often turn it off after Rudy got in whatever trouble he was going to cause for that episode.

"fat albert ... FAT ALBERT ... they should call you lunchtime. No class."

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Welcome and may everybody notice you in this little place of ours. Just be yourself and keep your agenda alive. Your future is still to be prosed and versed. Live long.

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Twist the time to realize, all innocent questions are really true lies.

Half of it will never get, the complexity of life we'll never regret.

How could anyone else see, there really is no distance between you and me.

Simple sounds become profound, little words become solid and sound.

How could you ever seek to create, an invisible line that can't make or break?

I know everyday who I am inside, I let my words reach far and wide.

Beautiful!

@tazzzyy Flattery will get you everywhere missy xD

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Welcome to the group, feel free to post some of your poetry if you want to.I am sure people here would love to read it

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Hey, hey, hey
Say it in prose or mix it in rhyme.
It doesn't matter, I'm just saying
any old time.

Hey, hey, hey
Spend some time with Agnostic.com
Reading, writing, exploring, dreaming
every old time.

cava Level 7 Mar 4, 2018
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I've noticed you ... so SUCCESS!

On a serious note, welcome to the merry gang.

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Consider yourself officially noticed.

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