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I wrote this when I was 16. And somewhat melancholic.

Once upon a time,
there was a nice little man
who wanted to rid the world of all evil, all hate, and all badness of every sort.

So, the nice little man went all around the world,
and everywhere he went, he gathered up
all the evil, and all the hate, and all the badness he could find.

And when he was done, he rolled it all up into a big, big ball,
and pushed it off into space,
and called it Earth.

saltimbocca 4 July 11
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Earth the prison colony for all misbehaved aliens.

azzow2 Level 9 July 12, 2018

Woa, life wasn't so nice to you at 16, was it. Me either !


Omg...I was caught off guard!! But it could be...?


Well my, my, my. That would explain things. Well done to your 16 Y.O. self.

Lincoln55 Level 8 July 11, 2018

Thanks! I've mellowed a bit since then.

@saltimbocca To paraphrase Tolstoy - a successful life is achieved by not sticking your head above the parapet.

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